Essays 2-02b: Complete draft

I will tell you about my best favorite place. My hometown has many good places for me. So, it is difficult for me to choose the best place in my hometown. However, I choose the best place in my hometown. My best favorite place is college now. Kumamoto Gakuen University is in Kumamoto. And, it is so big college. I will talk about favorite things detail.

 First, Kumamoto Gakuenuniversity has many circles. There are four big groups in Kumamoto Gakuen University. It is Gakusho, Bunka, Taiiku and Saren. I join Gakusho now. Gakusho has many circles. The study group of cultural assets is one of things in Gakusho. There are twenty members. It is not big group in Gakusho. It has 4 member of second grade student. They are so kind to everyone. They had been Kyoto, Hiroshima, Yamaguchi and so on. To study. They are often go to another prefecture to study. Another activity is drinking party. It is so funny. They are close friends each other. That’s because they are like a family.

 Next, I explain Gakusho society. Many student belong it in Kumamoto Gakuen University. I am one of the students in Gakusho society. Kumamoto Gakuen University has four big broups. Group of culture, Circle combination, group if physical and Gakusho society. A lot of people like Gakusho society. That’s because, it has 18 circles in Gakusho society. Gakusho society’s chairman is Kenshin. He is so funny. He is loved by so many people, I think. Gakusho society has some event in a year. For example, leader’s camping. It is in spring and autumn. So many people always join this event. That’s because, it is so interesting for everyone. Another event is 3G. It is to decide the funniest person in Gakusho society. If you interested in 3G, shall we go to it with me. you will like it, I think.

 Third, Do you know the Election Administration Committee. It is in Kumamoto Gakuen University. There are five members. The chairman is Masato Mori. His nickname is Morinoshin. He is so funny. I love him very much, because he is my boyfriend. He is always kind to me and everyone. When someone sees his funny face, someone can not to stop laughing. Another member is Aya Masumoto. Miku Shiraki, Ono Ryuki and Momoko Honda. They have very clear-cut personalities. They spend a lot of time. It was valuable time for them. They went to somewhere. For example, Aso mountain, Aso temple, bagel shop, restaurant, karaoke and so on. It was so interesting for them to go to there.

 For the reasons stated above, my favorite place is Kumamoto Gakuen University. It is treasure for me. Kumamoto Gakuen University is the best college I think. If I did not attend Kumamoto Gakuen University, I think that my life maybe is not good. It is happy for me to meet many friends. Kumamoto Gakuen University life is so fantastic.

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My favorite junior high memory

I will talk about my favorite junior high memory. I have some memories in junior high school days. I went to Nishibaru Junior High School. It is in Obiyama. It was so far for my house. It was so hard for me to go to junior high school in early morning.

I joined chorus club in high school. My part is soprano. Soprano is highest voice in chorus. I liked soprano’s member. I practiced every day. It was so hard for us, but we liked singing. One song completed by us, I was so glad. And we got gold medal sometimes. We were so happy.

I was in 3-4 final class. I liked them because we kind to me. My classroom teacher is Mr. Goto. He was so big man. And so funny man. We liked him very much. I liked physical education. We played basket ball, Ayaka and me enjoyed this time.
I want to see them now. This is my favorite junior high memory. Thank you for reading.
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My favorite music

I will talk about my favorite music. My hobby is listening music. I like music very much. I always listening some music. Do you like music? What kind of music do you like? I like J pop, classical music, western music and chorus etc... If you know good music, please tell me it. I introduce some musicians. First, do you know Golden Bomber? They are Japanese musicians. They are so funny. Many people is fascinated by their performance. Next, I introduce about Momoiro Clover Z. They are Japanese idol group. They are so active better than other idol groups. They do everything as hard as they can. I respect them. I like Kanako Momota the best in Momoiro Clover Z. She is so cute. I want to meet them. Next, do you know Acid Black Cherry? They are Japanese singer. I like them very much. I had been their concert once. I want to go their concert again. Yasu is vocalist. His voice is so sweet. At first, I will go to their concert, but I cannot it. That’s because I have important meeting on November 30th. When I realized it, I was so sad. I want to go it keenly. That’s all my favorite music. I cannot write everything I like. Please search that musician. And let’s listening their music. You will like it.
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Gakusho Institution training camp

This picture is Gakusho Institution training camp on September 6th and 7th. We went to Kirari. We stayed two cottages in the mountains. We joined it as the Election Administration Committee’s member. I had a fun time with them.
We did a barbecue on that lunch. Some people drank alcohol. It was so funny. After that, some people went to fishing. I went to it. I got 3 fish. I was so exciting! However, we too got fishing, it was so expensive. We laughed that money. When we backed a cottage, we went to Spa in evening. We talked about love, foods and secret etc… I enjoyed talking with them. That night, we did drinking party. So fan time! I enjoyed drinking some people. I was too drinking that day.
Next day, we went to Sushi. I ate sushi so many. I love salmon very much. We enjoyed lunch time! After that, I should go to work place. I wanted not go to there. That’s because, I wanted to go somewhere with them forever.
I enjoyed everything! I want to go again some member!
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Gakusho festival

This picture is Gakusho festival on October 6th 2012.
Each circle was performance on stage. My circle’s performance is a man dress as a woman. It was so funny. Almost people said it was very funny and he looks like real woman. I was so glad to hear!
Another circle performance was so good! I like everything it. I like ”It’s my yaaaaa!!” Reekun is so funny boy. I could not to stop laughing. Morinoshin was wear santa costume. The costume not becomes him. However, everyone laughed because he was funny. Gakusho festival is sooo funny day. I had nice day!

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Essays 2-02a: Complete drafts

I will tell you about my best favorite place. I have many favorite places in my hometown. So, it is difficult for me to choose one place. However, I choose one place. My best favorite place is college now. I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. It is in Kumamoto. It is so big college. I will talk about favorite things detail.

First, I join the study group cultural assets. There are twenty members. It is not big group in Kumamoto Gakuen University. However, I like them very much. Especially, I like some age members. They understand for me. And I want to understand for them. I am sub chairwoman. We went to somewhere because to see cultural assets. We went to Kyoto, Hiroshima and Yamaguchi. So we had fun time. Another activity is drinking party. We often do drinking party. It is so funny.  My group is close friends. I like them very much. Next, we are top grade in group. I want to interest last year in spending my group.

Next, my group belongs to Gakusho society. Kumamoto Gakuen University has 4 big groups. Group of culture, circle combination, group of physical and Gakusho society. I like Gakusho society very much. Gakusho's chairman is Kenshin. He is so funny. We have some event in year. Leader's camping is in spring and autumn. I have not joined it yet. I want to join next chance. I heard from some friends, it is so fun. Another, I like 3G. 3G is to decide the funniest person in Gakusho. If you interested in 3G, shall we go to it with me. You will like it, I think.

Third, I join the Election Adoministration Committee in Kumamoto Gakuen University. There are five members. The chairman is Masato Mori. His nickname is Morinoshin. I like him very very much! That's because he is very kind to me and everyone, and so funny. When I saw his funny face, I could not to stop laughing. Another member is Aya Masumoto, Miku shiraki Ryuki Ono. We have very clear-cut personalities. We spend a lot of time. It is valuable time for me. I want to spend almost time with them. We went somewhere, Aso Mountain, restaurant, karaoke etc...

It was so interesting!

For the reasons stated above, my favorite place is Kumamoto Gakuen University. It is my treasure!! Kumamoto Gakuen University is the best college I think. If I didn't attend Kumamoto Gakuen University, my life is maybe not good. I am happy to meet my friends. My life is so interesting!!!!

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Essay prep: My favorite places

I will talk about my favorite places. I have some favorite place. For example, my house and my hometown. There are some important things for me. I introduce to you my favorite place details.

First, my favorite place is my house. My house is in Hattanda. Do you know Hattanda? Almost people don't know it. It is between Nagamine and Goryo. I like there, but it is so far my college. So, I should get up early every day. It is difficult for me to get up. My house is in Hattanda. I have some favorite places in my house. For example, my room. My room is second floor. I always listening music in my room. My favorite singers are Momoiro-Clover-Z and Golden Bomber and AKB48 and Acid Black Cherry etc... When I listen to music, I am relaxed. I like this time. Another, I like bath room and rest room very much. I often stay there about thirty minutes or 1 hour. My mother say me "you too use there!" I think so too. However, I cannot stop it.

Second, my favorite place is my hometown. My hometown is Kumamoto. Kumamoto's main character is Kumamon. Do you know Kumamon? If you do not Kumamon, you back home and you should sarch by Wikipedia. By the way, I spent twenty years in Kumamoto. My high school is in Kumamoto. I went to Toryo high school two years ago. I like this school. I joined brass band club in high school days. It was so hard practice every day, every morning. However, I didn't quit the brass band club. That's because, I had many friends in it. When I was in very low spirit by fault, many friends cheered up me. I like them very much now.

Third, my favorite place is college. I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. I major the department of Britain and American. I always write, speak, and listen by English. It was so hard for me. And I should do many assignments. I cannot finish it. By the way, I join the study group cultural assets.
It belong Gakusho. I like Gakusho very much. I have many friends in Gakusho. And, I join the Election Administration Committee. It is five members. The chair is Morinoshin. Another member is Aya, Miku, Ryuki and me. We are close friends. We often go to somewhere, for example we go to Aso Mountain. It was so fun!! I love them better than like.

I have some favorite places. I cannot write there everything. And I will increase favorite places. I enjoy every day, every place. I always have fun time!! Happy----!!

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Essay prep: mind maps of favorite places

My Favorite place

• my house
  • my room
    • music
      • momoiro-clover-Z
      • golden bomber
      • Acid Black Cherry
    • comic
      • kokoro-button
      • kimini-todoke
      • kuroshitsuzi
    • bed
    • books
  • rest room
    • relax
  • bath room
    • relax
    • music
  • dog house
    • two dogs
      • Mu-su
      • Goro
  • living room
    • TV
    • family
• My hometown
  • nursery school
  • elementary school
  • junior high school
  • high school
    • friends
    • brass band
  • college
    • gakusho
      • the Election Administation Committee
      • gakusho institution
    • bunkazai
    • eibei
  • work place
    • shichisai
    • rawson
    • vorks
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My favorite high school memory

My favorite high school memory is everything! I like my high school friends, teachers, and memories. It is important for me. I will some memory in high school.
I jointed brass band club. My part was percussion. I like drums very much. It is so cool for me, because I jointed this club. At first, I could not read scores. It was difficult for me to understand it. My friends helped me. We were practiced after lesson. I was so happy. My friends very kind to me. I like them now.
Another one, we went to Tokyo and Toyama, because school excursion. It had good time. I played skiing. At first, I was afraid to play it. However, when I practiced it, I was so interesting! Now, I want to play skiing again. I will go to slope again.
My high school memory is so many. I cannot write everything. Now, I miss my high school friends. I love them very much!!

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My favorite animal

My favorite animal is dogs. I like dogs very much. That's because, they are very cute. I have two dogs. One dog is Corgi, another dog is mix. Corgi's name is Mu-su. Mix's dog's name is Gorou. Gorou's mother is Mu-su. They are parent and child. Mu-su likes bread very much, and she likes milk too. When she eats it, she is very cute and exciting. Gorou likes some foods. Gorou eats everything foods. He is silly and cute.
I like animals almost. Dogs, cats, pigs, pandas, giraffes and deers etc... Animals cheer up me every day. I also like birds. I like sparrows the best in everything birds. They are so cute. I want to keep them. However, they are nature animals. People should not keep them. I am so sad, but I understand it. Do you like some animals? What kinds of would you like animals? Please tell me your favorite animal.
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My favorite movie/ TV star

My favorite movie/ TV star is Momoiro Clover Z. I like them very much. They has five people. Red is Kanako Momota. Yellow is Shiori Tamai. Pink is Ayaka Sasaki. Green is Momoka Ariyasu. Purple is Reni Takashiro. I love Kanako Momota. She is very active. She is good at jumping. Shiori Tamai is young sister for everyone. She always eat something foods. However, she is very thin, not fat. I am jealous her. Ayaka Sasaki is very cute. Her nickname is A-rin. She likes cream puffs. However, when she was too fat, she stopped to eat it. I am look up for her, because I want to lose my weight. I understand to bear is so difficult. Momoka Ariyasu is small girl. she is good at dancing. I like her very much. Reni Takashiro is the oldest girl in Momoiro Clover Z. She is good at doing funny face. She is so funny. I like them very much.
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My favorite sport to watch

My favorite sport to watch is soccer game. I like to watch soccer better than playing it. Soccer game is always excited me. I want to watch Roasso Kumamoto's game. Do you know Roasso Kumamoto? It is soccer team in Kumamoto. They are famous soccer team in Kumamoto. A lot of people in Kumamoto like them. I like them too. I have watched their soccer game once. I want to watch many times. I will go to their soccer game. I want to watch big soccer game. For example, Olympic. Do you want to watch soccer game? Let's go to watch soccer game with me.
Another one, my favorite sport to watch is volley ball. I like volley ball to watch and to play. Volley ball need team work. I choose volley ball class in high school. It was so fun time. I liked this time very much. I want to play volley ball again. I will play with my friends.

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My favorite book

My favorite book is a lot. I like harry potter series. Do you know hurry potter? This story is the boy in magic school. It is so fantastic story. I am very excited reading it. If you do not know this book, you should read it. You will like it. You will quite taken with it, I think. That's because I am quite taken with it.
Another book is library war. It was written by Hiro Arikawa. I like the best it in some books. This story is fighting with evil in library. I cannot explain it well. You should read this book. So exciting story. It became movie and TV drama and animation. However, I just read it. That's because, I do not like books became something. The story image complete in my brain. It is face, voice and costume etc... Movie, TV drama and animation are break out my image. I like something to read books.

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Town Parade

This picture was sityu parade on 29th September 2012. We made this costume since summer vacation. It was so hard for us to make it all. That’s because we need a lot of costume.
We make it in Gakkan. Do you know Gakkan? It has Rawson. We used a sewing machine. It was so heavy. We needed so many time for make it all.
My circle is Bunkazai Kenkyu Kai. We search important cultural assets sometimes. And we join town parade.
We made Christmas costume. It was so cute. We made two types. One type is Santa Claus, another type is caribou. I like them.
When it was rainy on 29th September, we were so sad. However we enjoyed that time!!

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BR 2-05: Hunting

This book is how to hunting. Have you do hunting? I have not it, because I always buy something to eat. I cannot do hunting.
Indigenous people always hunting some animals, because they eat it for alive. I understand it. When they want to find animals, they find animals sign. For example, tracks, manure and smell.
Uncle Francis says, when he saw animals sign, he understood what kind of animals it is, how big, what it was doing and which way it went. I am surprised. I do not realize it ever.
Indigenous people have hunting with sounds. They use own hands.
If you interested in their hunting style, you should try to read this book. So I think you will enjoy it.

Reference

Linda, Bruce. Zita, HIlvert-Bruce (2004) Hunting, Australia: usborne

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BR 2-04: Fishing

This book is how to fishing. Do you know how to fishing? I do not know how to fishing detail. When I read this book, I want to play fishing. I had played fishing twice. I enjoyed this time.

This book explains Indigenous people’s fishing. They use classic type of fishing. They live near the big river so they always fishing for alive. 

Canoes were made from sheets of bark. They always use it, when they go to river. I am surprised that Indigenous people’s style. I cannot it. I think that their culture were protected by them. 

If you interested in their fishing style, you should read this book. So you will enjoy it.

REFERENCE

Linda, Bruce and Zita, Hilvert-Bruce (2004) FISHING, Australia: usborne

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my favorite color is a lot of. i like pink. pink is so cute. My pencil case is pink color. My glasses case is pink color. My pencil is pink color. my hair band have pink flower. I have many goods of pink. My favorite color is red. i like red clothes. Today, My cloth is red and my hair band is red ribbon. Red is so cute as same as pink. I like red color better than pink color. My host family have a red car. This name is Big Red. I always talked about Big Red with my host father in Minnesota. We enjoyed this time. Which do you like pink or red? I like blue color as not same as pink and red. I like sky blue. Sky blue is so beautiful. Do you like sky? If you like sky, you will like sky blue. I want to go mount of Aso and I want to see sky sky in there. If I will go there, I enjoy this time.
Color is so many kinds. I change to like color by my feelings. If i sad time, I may choose black color. If I feel happy, I may choose red color or pink color goods. Please tell me your favorite color!
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my favorite elementary school memory

My favorite elementary school memory is so many.
First, I enjoyed elementary school. I joined chorus club. My part is soprano. I like singing with my friends. I always practice of singing after classes. It is very hard, but I liked it. We joined musical contest many times. We got gold medal. We were so happy.
Next, I became the head of cheering group in six grades. I was red team captain. We always practice of cheering after classes. The practice was so hard. So, it was so hard for me. But my friends cheer up me. I was so happy.
Third, I went to Nagasaki on a school excursion in 6 grade. We went to many places. We made a music box. I like it, but now I lost it. I am so sad. I want to find it.
My elementary school days were so valuable. I want to meet my friends in elementary school. We will meet on 2013, because we will become twenty years old. It is Seijinsiki in japan.
I want to meet my friends soon!!!
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